Eternally Yours

Your Thoughts?

So I have the next five-ish chapters either written or plotted out (yes, I am that nerdy).  Now I am at an impasse.

So things are moving around pretty clearly until Chapter 78.  At that point there is a pretty clear switch to a plot that revolves more around the twins than Mollie.  I want to give Mollie her full 40 chapters but I feel like things will get muddled.

Personally, I feel like Mollie’s story is coming to a close before Chapter 80.  I have almost 20 chapters of Penny’s life written.  I know where Olivia is going, too.  Things are slow for the story right now but I think that’s because I’m in Penny’s head now.

I want to know what my readers think:

  • Does Mollie’s story end when I feel her story has ended?
  • Do you want Mollie’s story to play out through those chapters?
  • Do you want the focus to switch to Generation 3  a bit early?
  • Is this story still interesting to you?
  • And does anyone else think Mollie wants to set Garrett on fire in this photo?

5 thoughts on “Your Thoughts?

  1. Is Mollie pregnant? I can’t help it when I see those types of outfits XD.

    Anyway XD

    Does Mollie’s story end when I feel her story has ended? Not sure, I think that’s kind of something the writer has to pick.
    Do you want Mollie’s story to play out through those chapters? I would like to see her around. Maybe splash in bits of her from time to time.
    Do you want the focus to switch to Generation 3 a bit early? I’m good with how things are now. LOL
    Is this story still interesting to you? Yesh!
    And does anyone else think Mollie wants to set Garrett on fire in this photo? Kinda XD

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